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Birds were chirping that too in harmony
Sun light kissing the earth n creating a symphony
Wind blowing away the sheet of night
And there was a hoarding, “India’s future is bright”

That is when I saw a school rickshaw at a corner
With colorful patches saying “St. Mary’s n Corners’
They were not one but seven kids in all
Looking cute and not dozing at all

I glanced at the hoarding and back at them
Wondering they are the future and saw promise in them
There I saw little geniuses inside
And my heart said India’s future is bright

I saw a doctor in that cold
Curing the poor and helping the old
Then I looked and saw an engineer
Designing tools and sophisticated gears
There was an IAS officer beside him
Working for the welfare, and doing the admin
That girl next to him, looked busiest of all
Oh! She has just won Pulitzer, my God!
This boy seems to be talented
That world class painting, its he who painted
Girl with blue eyes, is how I know her
She has just surprised us, by winning Oscars

So I was a spectator to India’s future
Which looked all right and I am sure is bright
This must have given you a lot to smile
Reading this and imagining for a while

All seven of them are India’s future
They are bright, we just have to nurture
Promises will be fulfilled by them
On the condition that we guide them


You must be thinking who the seventh kid is
Have I missed him or you have over read him?
Well I could not have missed him, coz I saw
The seventh kid was pulling the rickshaw


I glanced at the hoarding and back at them
All the jingoism died that second
That boy was sweating from head to toe
I had tears and my eyes were staring the floor

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I hav stopped commentin on ur poems coz I dun hav any more adjectives left in mah book to fit in :-) I mean boi... u r juss so good - but - I am fairly annoyed wid u ... can't u rest n relax?? juss stay in bed & recover rather than writin n exercisin ur brain cells .... iz that too hard a task for u?? On one hand u always say that u hav no time n wanna rest n wen u actually hav time to rest... u end up bloggin ... Take care re!! Get well soon :-)
** sorrie for screamin ....hugzz hugzz **

Common dont sound as if I am always fishing for compliment. Just read and I guess thats good enough....rest well I am trying very hard to rest....cancelled my appointment today also and is resting (trying to rest) in my bed....it gets so boring...screaming...hahahah nahi you shd have screamed on me and its completely okie....:)

WELL DONE

(Anonymous)

2006-11-20 10:38 am (UTC)

DUDE U ALWAYS GOT SOMETHNG UNDER UR SLEVE..
MATE THE POEM IS VERY GOOD..
SEEMS THS MARKETING GURU IS GR8 POET ALSO...
REALLY MATE IT WAS VERY GOOD ..
TAKE CARE ..
GET WELL SOON

thanx mate , there are 2 hypothesis which can be questioned...one : me being marketing guru and second : a great poet....hehehe but as I like compliments so I would accept it warmly......
keep looking for this space you are there in for a surprise....!!!

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